this is the plot of a fan-comic i plan on making. it's fan-based off of bittersweet candy bowl by veronica "taeshi" vera. i'm just putting it here for safe keeping and also in case something happens to my computer where it breaks or i can't use it anymore. anyway, this is up for critiquing so for anyone who's read BCB and wants to give some advice i'm going to try my best to improve. also big note: DO NOT CRITICIZE THE GRAMMAR AND SPELLING!!!!! look i'm trying to improve my story ideas, grammar can come next. besides this is going to be a fan-comic not a fan-fic so it wouldn't matter.
it starts off with mike, tess, paulo, augustus and daisy